Monday, February 22, 2016

Luna Park Ver.2.0


Luna Park for Our Son

We decided to take our son to Luna Park directly from the day care. It was a clear and sunny day when we arrived. There were a lot of people from various ages.


Natanel was astonished to see a lot kind lights with spinning carousel.
We traveled between facilities to find something that can fit Natanel's age. Finally, we found the train and when he saw it he got very excited. At first, we were a little scared if we will give him to ride on this train he can a afraid or even cry, but we took our chances and we let him ride in.
Natanel sat next to little girl and they start riding in train.
To our surprise he was so joyful, happy, smiling, laughing on the train, we were excited from his respond to the train ride, but the little girl that sat next to him was so sad scared and cried so the operator stopped the train and took her out and afterwards continued operate the train.


When the train stopped and the next line had to take their places on the train, Natanel didn't want to go and started crying, he was so sad. We took him to see the horses, and we saw there that children are riding on ponies as well, so we decided to let him ride on the pony. To our surprise we found out that he likes horses too, so he sat on the pony and by walking pace he rides on the pony and his excitement was indescribable.


When he done with the riding on the pony his ride, he was a little tired, so his mood changed and he became cranky, so it was time to drive back home.

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  1. Luna Park Ver.2.0

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